23rd Vol.1 Remake Chapter 1 page 11 (ENG)

I normally dont write critiques, because i feel that i, with my quallity of drawing, I dont have The right to. But to this comic, I will make an exception. I like it. Its an original comic with a very good placement and ideas. Although The beggining is a bit slow, it fita The atmosfere of a radioactive environment and all The cares taken. It is a little Boeing on The beggining, but i look towards reading this comic, it has so much potencial to become something worth saying it was made by archie as a spin-off series of their normal comic. Some people may complain about The lack of digital colors, but i think it fits this comic. Keep doing it, i will love reading. For me, this comic earns a 8,5 out of 10.